Вот, быстренько перевел несколько абзацев. Черновой вариант. Уверен, что тоже есть ошибки, но намного меньше.
Код:
It's been a hard landing. The life-boat
ran into a vertical mounaintside and
splitted. Muffled up in a shock cocoon, I
rolled down the slope into spiny bushes.
I lay motionless for a few minutes. All
my body ached. It was difficult to
breath. Having hardly doffed the cocoon,
I got on my feet. I felt giddy, but,
strangly enough, my arms and legs were
intact.
I looked around. Plumb greyish green
rocks obstructed half the sky to the
north-west and south. Swamps stretched
to the east. Far to the north loomed the
line of a forest.
[look at boat]
In the life-boat I found a microbattery
connected to the board computer.
[look at cocoon]
Nothing important...
[look at battery]
"ARTANG THE GREAT. Universal charger".
[look at comp]
Seems, it still works.
[use comp]
I touched the sensors. "Ready" - replied
the computer in Artangian.
[talk to comp]
1. Where am I?
2. Board sysrtem diagnostics
3. Take the bearings of local radio-
signal sources
4. First aid
[1]
The planet system was not found in the
database.
[2]
Fatal malfunctions in the life-support
system found.
[3]
An undentified radio source detected in
the east.
[4]
Something clicked on the cmputer's
panel, opened two folds, revealing a
little chamber built into the panel.
There lay an ampule inside.
Если нет серьезных претензий, продолжу в том же духе.
А тексты все-таки достаньте. Каждую локацию полностью исследовать — с ума сойдешь.
Ответить с цитированием
Размещение рекламы на форуме способствует его дальнейшему развитию 
Сообщение от goodboy
